Living in a country where you have to speak in a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the contemporary world, a lot of people choose to migrate to another country and have to face vary problems, one of them is foreign language. People think that It is necessary to speak a local languages of the country where immigrants live because this affect on their social life and other issues in normal days. Personally, I strongly agree with that opinion.
Firstly, The ability to speak with the residences by their languages could help them to develop social relationships. Communication encourages the foreign people being confident to make friends and feeling easier to get on well within their socializing scope. Lacking friendship, They would feel loneliness.For instant, overseas students who do not understand the local language would find it hard to look for a accompany and do group assignments. So, Local language plays an essential role in Socializing. If immigrants can speaking it, they would face a lot of problems. In fact, In some situations, If they live in a stable places where is abroad, they would have to work in local companies. The lack of major vocabularies can make them fail to join in discussion with their colleagues. In other cases, If a person goes shopping but they can not describe the product features they want, Sellers can not introduce the suitable products.
In conclusion, I reckon that conservation skills in abroad language creates a close-Knitting relationship with others surrounding us and can deal with some problems in daily life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ntry where immigrants live because this affect on their social life and other issues in n...
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... friendship, They would feel loneliness.For instant, overseas students who do not u...
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...understand the local language would find it hard to look for a accompany and do g...
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...anguage would find it hard to look for a accompany and do group assignments. So,...
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...anguage would find it hard to look for a accompany and do group assignments. So, Local lan...
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... not introduce the suitable products. In conclusion, I reckon that conservatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, so, well, i reckon, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14814814815 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95314445443 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600823045267 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9168179066 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213163554049 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718499985882 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031669075584 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137349904717 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347132110317 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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