In the contemporary world, a lot of people choose to migrate to another country and have to face vary problems, one of them is foreign language. People think that It is necessary to speak a local languages of the country where immigrants live because this affect on their social life and other issues in normal days. Personally, I strongly agree with that opinion. The following will present reasons for that.
Firstly, The ability to speak with the residences by their languages could help them to develop social relationships. Communication encourages the foreign people being confident to make friends and feeling easier to get on well within their socializing scope. Lacking friendship, they would feel loneliness. For instant, overseas students who do not understand the local language would find it hard to look for aaccompany and do group assignments.
Secondly, Local language plays an essential role in Socializing. If immigrants could not speaking that language, they would face a lot of problems. In fact, In some situations, If they live in a stable places where is abroad, they would have to work in localcompanies. The lack of major vocabularies can make them fail to join in discussion with their colleagues. In other cases, If a person goes shopping but they can not describe the product features they want, Sellers can not introduce the suitable products.
In conclusion, I reckon that conservation skills in abroad language creates a close-Knitting relationship with others surrounding us and can deal with some problems in daily life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'language'?
Suggestion: language
...k that It is necessary to speak a local languages of the country where immigrants live be...
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Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ntry where immigrants live because this affect on their social life and other issues in n...
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Line 4, column 90, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'speak'
Suggestion: speak
...in Socializing. If immigrants could not speaking that language, they would face a lot of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, i reckon, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21912350598 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95984566123 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601593625498 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.104923031 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5714285714 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205396797844 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598945471896 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039294522371 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117506319272 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288003394245 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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