In the contemporary world, the science-based field are concerned if research report should be published widely on the internet. Many people believe that posting these documentary as well as information is really necessary for communities, while those who are not in this opinion think that it is too sensitive to share some information related to private organizations. Personally, I believe that protecting information out of the strangers or bad ideal man would be the better choice for some reasons which will be explained below.
On the one hand, there are two primary reasons why some news related to science, business or academic world are considered to publish all kind of means. Firstly, following to this sentiment, Spreading information could motivate the development of the human in the future, especially in the scientific field such as Technology or Biology. For example, during the Covid-19 Epidemic, thanking to the information about the vaccine manufactured machine and vaccine formulas shared by all the countries on the world help Viet Nam overcame the terrible period. Secondly, pushing all of information helps people being awareness of the truth of a organization in a particular way. In the day and age, All people join in the social motivations and being a part of an economic field, therefore they have a right to get the sincere news, for example the business results of entrepreneurs. As a results, for example, the holder in the stock market just decided to own market share of some companied which post the financial reports.
On the other hand, It seems to me that Some secret information should be hided from the public which incudes their competitor or armies. As can be realized clearly that national secret which can influence on thousand and thousands residents living in that country could be prevented to talk out in the internet carelessly. In other word, The infection of a news should be considered if there has impact on social and national prosperity before publishing on the social media. On the second reason to support this sentiment is that Scientist or information providers should be award or get a fees to give anyone information because of their efford. It will be unfair if some one can have some thing without paying anything.
In conclusion, nowadays, people are getting more information about all of field just by a smart phone accessed to Internet. However, I think that it would be better if we consider whether information should be posted because of their dangerous contents or their value.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 637, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... people being awareness of the truth of a organization in a particular way. In th...
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Line 2, column 881, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...e business results of entrepreneurs. As a results, for example, the holder in the stock m...
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Line 3, column 577, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awarded'?
Suggestion: awarded
...tist or information providers should be award or get a fees to give anyone informatio...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 590, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a fee', 'a feis' or simply 'fees'?
Suggestion: a fee; a feis; fees
...mation providers should be award or get a fees to give anyone information because of t...
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Line 3, column 670, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...e of their efford. It will be unfair if some one can have some thing without paying anyt...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 688, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
... It will be unfair if some one can have some thing without paying anything. In conclusio...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2132.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 419.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08830548926 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85476047753 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527446300716 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 674.1 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.1364372329 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.25 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1875 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314550153439 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100018081324 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570199763489 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190577356594 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758130597797 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 637, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... people being awareness of the truth of a organization in a particular way. In th...
^
Line 2, column 881, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...e business results of entrepreneurs. As a results, for example, the holder in the stock m...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 577, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awarded'?
Suggestion: awarded
...tist or information providers should be award or get a fees to give anyone informatio...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 590, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a fee', 'a feis' or simply 'fees'?
Suggestion: a fee; a feis; fees
...mation providers should be award or get a fees to give anyone information because of t...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 670, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...e of their efford. It will be unfair if some one can have some thing without paying anyt...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 688, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
... It will be unfair if some one can have some thing without paying anything. In conclusio...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2132.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 419.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08830548926 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85476047753 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527446300716 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 674.1 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.1364372329 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.25 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1875 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314550153439 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100018081324 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570199763489 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190577356594 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758130597797 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.