Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is believed by people that the more data in scientific experiments, business and the academic world is established, the more advantages are brought back. However, others think that significantly vital data should not be shared massively. There are explanations why people support the first statement, on the other hand, i am wholeheartedly of the latter one.
That people believe sharing as much information in those three main criteria as possible may be advantageous bases on many reasons. First, information can help boost the development process of a country. The explanation for this is that according to scientific research contained in these data, governments can predict possible trends and economic movements in the near future. As a result, they are capable of preparing technology and infrastructural quality in order to adapt flawlessly. In addition, information sharing in science, business and global academia is the key to improve lives of citizens, especially those who have difficult living conditions. The example can be seen easily in the case of poor countries in Africa. According to experiments on natural conditions and surveys about human resources, it is possible for international authorities to establish new policies to improve those regions.
In contrast, despite the advantages, this trend can lead to far more disadvantageous situations which take effort and demand time to solve. Sharing some vital data in science, business not only affects negatively but also reverses an economic upward trend. The case occurs when national secrets are revealed, for instance, secured messages or firewall access passwords, which make way for opponents to discover weaknesses and attack the system. Moreover, these types of information also lead to business failures and collapses. It will be problematic when a strategy of success or key points to success are published. Thus, companies will become less competitive and soon be outweighed. This can result in serious consequences such as unemployment and reduction of quality.
In conclusion, while many people believe that sharing information in scientific research, business and the academic world as much as possible may be beneficial, i think that some data is too vital to be published which can cause serious consequences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...the first statement, on the other hand, i am wholeheartedly of the latter one. ...
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Line 4, column 162, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... as much as possible may be beneficial, i think that some data is too vital to be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5014084507 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09041944127 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574647887324 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1449104407 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7222222222 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331155214433 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889175908615 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106138990814 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22919268447 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122437712181 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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