Migration to a new country brings different obstacles and opportunities for emigrants, especially when a country with different language is chosen. Without knowing society language, vital social and practical obstacles have been happening. This essay will discuss why I completely agree with this proposition because communication and adapting is hard while you don’t know country's language.
Speaking help us to convey our aims and ideas to other people. The main reason why living in a foreign language country increase social and practical issues is because language is an important factor to make connection and relationship with everyone so that person can be isolated from society without knowing it's language. For example, it would be impossible to find a job while you can't speak and interview with any employer while you may be completely eligible for a job position. In short, language is a key tools to be involved in a society.
A secondary reason why human faces with variant drawbacks when living in a country with foreign language is because knowing a language helps person to understand culture, customs and common trends of people in that place and lets person to adapt with new place soon. For instance, it could hard to feel comfortable while you participated in local ceremony while you have not understood anything about it. Clearly, weird language cause to be remain a strange person and not adapt with new environment.
This essay discussed why foreign language country can make important practical and social problems because without knowing language communication and adapting with society becomes very hard. In my opinion, I completely agree with the proposition that strange language can cause serious drawbacks for emigrants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, second, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34532374101 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79397082434 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510791366906 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0902685165 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235405898266 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946537630728 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406670556556 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164870914657 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281958610662 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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