living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problem, as well as practical problem.
to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
it's difficult for people when they live in a country, which must be speaked a foreign language due to the serious social issue causing. personally, i agree with this statement and there is my opinion about that.
one of the most issue that people can easily find out is about language. inparticular, they can explain that all of their opinion when they speak, thus there are the reason make people don't understand together, even cause the negative effection in thier life. In stance, this problem always happen with the international students when they study abroad, specially those have yet exposed to that language before. In comparison, people can't keep pace with the speech of foreigner as well as mother languge. for this reason, it will create decrease in conversation quality and people can't focus on that in order to continous.
Cuture also is one of the complex problem with the citizens when they travel abroad. in specific, the tradition of each country is different with others, so it will cause dangerous behaviours in reality. For example, the majority of opinion in the survey of colloge students claim that they was shocked by the various culture because it was too different with thier country about food, style, etc. thus, the difference of culture will cause serious problems in society.
in conclusion, for this reasons i mention above, i think that actually, deciding to live in other country means that people have to face with a lot of problem but with the right action, i believe that '' nothing is impossible''
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, thus, well, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97674418605 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48284783694 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8405095167 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258935896828 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977036168523 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492972719382 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164291258805 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017791894318 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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