It is predominant nowadays for people to look up to science, technology and business instead of art. I agree with the view that art is a crucial part of all cultures and we have to notice more about it.
On the one hand, art contributes a big impact for mental health progress, particularly for those who have mental illness. In the near decades, people have been struggling with stress day by day in work and casual life a lot. Some of us could not confront the severe condition in life and chose the dead to be rid of their black. Besides, instead of the dead or extreme action, plenteous people chose art for moderating their feelings such as drawing or taking photos because art is an opportunity to capture, document and remember the happy times and the things in life that naturally tend to relax you. Exposing yourself in each artistic product you make is one way to help people lessened stress. In other words, you can get into numerous happy things and release your feelings into each work.
On the second hand, it is not only assisting people to improve mental health or hobbies, art also helps you make money on it. Besides jobs related to science, technology and business, there are numberless jobs with a high salary range for people who have hobbies in art such as fashion design, photographer, curator and so on which get abundant money. In this age, there are clothes, shooting a picture of products or people and art-related works demanded in casual life and many companies and individuals seek people to be a part of their companies.
Overall, art plays a crucial role in people's lives and helps people live positively through the day. It is not just considered a hobby now, it is also a job making living in our life.
- For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world However nowadays people s values have changed and we tend to consider science technology and business more important than arts What do you think are the causes of this 87
- The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966 1986 and 2006 67
- Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 87
- The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980 79
- Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world However these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science technology and business Why do you think that is What could be done to encourage more pe 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, second, so, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63106796117 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46227067715 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569579288026 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7308589145 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.076923077 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281317630955 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982966490321 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642843702467 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18297446938 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777379415001 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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