In this modern world, each and every part of the globe have tourists attraction and also tourism is a good source to enhance the economy of world. But sometimes tourism may have some negative effects on local people. This trend have some advantages as well as some disadvantages. I will discuss both in forthcoming paragraphs.
There are two main advantages of tourism, boost in country’s economy and it create large number of new job openings for the local people. First of all, tourists spend money on a wide range of services, including hotels, amusements, transportation, food and medical services. This way, tourism greatly supporting the countries’ economy. Secondly, tourism increase the level of employment by bringing new jobs. For instance, tourists are hire tour guide, hotel staff and employees of retail services.
However, tourism also has some major disadvantages like destruction of popular tourist destinations and development of illegal economic activities. Old buildings and temple has a struggle to vast amount of tourists’s traffic and get damaged. Some environmental problems are cause by tourists. Moreover, tourism can create more serious situations where criminal issues are involved. The tourists are have lot of money to spend, and carry with valuables such as cameras and jewelries, increase the attraction for criminals and bring with it activities like robbery and drug dealing.
In conclusion, though tourism has certain disadvantages like destruction effects and growth of crime rate but it has extremely positive impact on country’s economy and provide large number of new jobs for the local people. I personally believe that benefits of tourism is outweigh the disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ive effects on local people. This trend have some advantages as well as some disadva...
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Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
... boost in country's economy and it create large number of new job openings for th...
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Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...l issues are involved. The tourists are have lot of money to spend, and carry with v...
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Line 7, column 278, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
...lly believe that benefits of tourism is outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56226415094 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0887339929 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.8549283458 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.125 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228877879022 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736844969021 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06918858171 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137021600921 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387013726802 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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