Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions . DO you agree or disagree ?

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...erving the libraries . In my perspective , I completely disagree with this opinion...
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...mation in reading books in the libraries . Firstly , Wi-fi connection system appe...
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...they could finish their quickly. Finally , through improvement in modern devices a...
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... but also in the international countries . The main reason is that libraries creat...
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...ugh standard and high cognitive students , libraries could enhance the concentrati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2355.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 432.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45138888889 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02393622869 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539351851852 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 727.2 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.504104608 49.4020404114 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 214.090909091 106.682146367 201% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.2727272727 20.7667163134 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.5454545455 7.06120827912 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 51.0 5.01903807615 1016% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127177237923 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514269927655 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350563501961 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890313808282 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032084458552 0.056905535591 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.