Major companies use sport events to promote their products. Some people think it has a negative effect on sport. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.
It is true that various sporting occasions are prime times for many product companies to promote their goods to attract the mass audience. Though some people think, this process has an undesirable impact on public’s mind but in my opinion, it helps to get information about different kind of products and we can select the necessary one from these.
The companies always look for the place to advertise themselves. For this reason, many billboards and posters are hanged beside the main areas of the streets. Most of the time, these are not noticed by the possible buyers. On the eve of any sporting occasions, game lovers get together in a single place to enjoy it and this moments are very precious for the advertisers. For instance, in a cricket stadium, the field is surrounded by publicizing papers which are generally noted by the spectators than other places. So, in short, audience’s detection is one the important issues for advertisers to
endorse their items at the time of gaming.
Moreover, a sporting event generally lasts for a day or a month. Corporations think it is very much cost effective for them. Because, it is sometimes found that rather than canvasing all around year, it is more fruitful to target certain time period to promote their goods. For instance, adidas company generally shows their advertisement at the time of live sports event and their target audience can be reached through this process rather than advertising here and there.
On contrary, in television, when we enjoy a live sporting event, sometimes excessive ads can cause great problems by showing it frequently, specifically at time of the thrilling moments.
In conclusion, consumer and cost minimization can be the reason for the various national and multinational firms to promote their product during the sporting events. Though, there are some drawbacks of it but I think it is wise to cope up with it, because most of the time these enterprises sponsor the occasions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in short, kind of, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09146341463 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80885190397 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579268292683 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6492586943 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211913181398 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750234607097 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437425991185 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106466910821 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484994286999 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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