Many animals are facing extinction in the wild. Why is this happening? What can be done to protect them?
At present, an abundant number of animals are getting eradicates. In this subsequent essay, I shall scrutinies the reason behind it and suggest some practical ways to get rid of it, as animals are an integral part of the environment.
A wide range of factors contributes to the fact of abolishing animals, but two prime causes are mentioned. The first and foremost occurrence of being the extinction of animals is a malicious environment. People are cutting trees, the global warning is prolonging, and animals are getting affected by many diseases; thus, they are dying. So the deforestation is the prime behind it.
Another reason that needs to be pointed is the habit of preying feral animals of the inhabitant. People are killing wild animals as passion. Owing to which, animals are diminishing.
However, to hold the extinction of animals, some conducive approaches can be taken. First of all, people need to be cautious about animals right. Animals need to be taken care from human as they have an equal foothold to live world. Take the example of people who live in west-world. They are incredibly conscious towards animals and wildlife that they hardly cut down a tree and hurt animal.
Eventually, the bureaucrat can cripple this problem out by reinforcing a few law. Government has to play a pivotal role here to general masses to comply with the system by emphasis. They can build legislation of punishment for those who kill an animal for their hobbies. For instance, the authority of Newzealand has a strict rule where they enrolled that, dwellers who prey animals just for their adventure will be punished in jail.
To recapitulate, it is true that animals are decreasing for the human's tomfool activities there is the solution as well. People have to obey the approaches are aforementioned.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun law seems to be countable; consider using: 'few laws'.
Suggestion: few laws
...ipple this problem out by reinforcing a few law. Government has to play a pivotal role ...
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Line 9, column 65, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...rue that animals are decreasing for the humans tomfool activities there is the solutio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, thus, well, as to, for instance, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0365448505 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81837642261 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578073089701 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9367152088 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.05 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209932196448 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649422295237 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494412224285 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105096061041 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409980577282 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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