Nowadays, increasing the kind of animals who are facing the danger of extinction has become an alarming issue for wildlife. This essay will discuss how human activities can cause overthrow species and will put forward some solutions to cope with this issue as well as.
Poaching and loss of habitat are the two main contributors to put animals on the verge of death. Logging, agriculture and climate change all are activities which cause to ruining habitat as a result of the human role in nature, so those kinds of animals who unable to adapt themselves with the new situation, they will die. The other main factor that contributes to vanish animals is illegal hunting. Indeed, besides food, animals are often hunted for specific body parts like their fur, feathers, or horns. For instance, in Africa, the population of elephants have been dwindling due to excessive hunting for their precious ivory. Hence, these two factors are the most important reason for dying out animals.
To mitigate this problem, this should be considered that the protection of animals will not be possible only with government intervention. Therefore, the government should provide breeding centres and sanctuary to protect animals from the danger, besides, they must pass laws that treat hunters seriously. For examples, a result of research indicates that breeding centres have a considerable impact on the protection of animals. Therefore, government interference has a significant role to protect animals.
The extinction issue has become one of the concerns of environmentalists. This essay discussed the two essential agents that lead to this problem for the environment, and also suggested some solutions to tackle this environmental dilemma.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in fact, kind of, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35164835165 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84240115413 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0517174296 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.357142857 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191752324511 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641181720601 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548446563982 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117851025082 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447972457729 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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