The increasing of injuries due to hazardous sports have become a concern in the sports community. While some claim that these sports should be announced illegal by governments, others believe that individuals should have the choice right to follow their desired activities. This essay will argue the various reason why people hold these points of views and whether these physical activities should be prohibited by governments or not.
On the one hand, some contend that the prophecy of doing physical activities is health, and performing dangerous sports is conflicted with this purpose. Furthermore, they claim that the significant advocates of these activities are juveniles and adolescents who are the vulnerable strata of society that can be hurt easily since lack of awareness of all the consequences. For instance, in car racing, if accidents happen, it is highly likely that the participants will suffer from serious injuries or even lose their lives. Hence, for these reasons, some demand these sport banned.
On the other hand, opponents of this view claim that social members should be free to choose any sports. They assert that the adventure is necessary for mental evacuation person and Adrenaline secretion in the body help individuals to be happier and forget their life problems for a while as well as. Therefore, people should have the power or right to act what sports they inclined to perform.
Concern about risky sports has increased in society since it is highly possible that the participants will suffer from serious injuries, or even lose their lives. This essay discussed why in some view government should restrict high-risk sports but why people ought to be free to select their sports field. In my opinion, Free choice of sport is the primary right of athletes.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17525773196 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61547473112 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539518900344 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9263554971 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.846153846 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312041645639 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118550467003 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810431712067 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20160274398 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662287318642 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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