Nowadays, the internet has become one inseparable of a human's life, and that makes it easy for children to access. While this accessibility can be having some negative consequence, it has some benefice that can have a positive impact on their life. In my opinion, the advantages of using the internet outweigh the disadvantages for children eventually.
Easy availability to the internet was always one of the parents' worries. Indeed, it is justified that they are worried about what is published on internet space because children are very vulnerable. They contend that abuse usage of the internet can afford moral deviations, Cyber-bullying and severe psychological and mentality damage for children. Every year, many children are victims of Cyber-bullying in all around the world. In sum up, children cope with some challenges in using the internet, which can damage them through their life.
On the contrary, the benefits of using a computer are widely admitted. The correct usage of the internet can be useful for children to thrive as the internet helps them to learn efficiently and solve their problems by access to a wealth of information. Furthermore, the internet can help to reinforce children's language skills and computer's knowledge; children's mind is very ready to understand new issues and internet provide this opportunity for them to access precious information. For instance, a result of a study indicates that children who learn to how correctly use the internet are more creative and intelligent, and they are prosperous in their future life as well as. As a result, accessibility to the internet provides valuable opportunities for children to cultivate their minds.
Easy access to children to the internet has become a controversial issue. While children struggle with some destructive complications of using the internet, it is clear that parent's accurate management can put it in the right direction. From my point of view, whatever is caused to children to bolster their mind and help children to get experience and improve their talent have worth to cope with any challenge in their path.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...nternet has become one inseparable of a humans life, and that makes it easy for childr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, well, while, for instance, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23529411765 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98027541051 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502941176471 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4590283824 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.25 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280420330287 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111916093455 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599456753768 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193147040039 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422210701258 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.