Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
In contemporary society, there is a growing consensus that the kid's regimen plays a fundamental role in influencing the detrimental lifestyle. Although some people believe that the cause of this issue spring from the educational institutions and parents, others dispute this statement. To the best my knowledge, both schools and parents have the responsibility to deal with this thorny issue. I am biased towards the former opinion and the following essay will analyze both views in-depth.
Initially, it is essential to recognize that all good habits begin at home. To be more specific, the parent who takes care of their child's daily food intake, relating to nutrition by what kids consume. In other words, getting a good healthy and having well an immune system is contingent upon the dietary component such as fish, meat, vegetable which is safeguarded in general growth. A good case at this point is that parents usually up to the ears at workplaces and unmindful to their kids; therefore, the children seem to binge what they like such as junk food and carbonated beverages as the same kind of meal. As a result, some kids can either become obesity or malnutrition, is sooner or later.
On the flip side, it is equally pivotal to acknowledge that schools are also places where teachers play a vital role in educating students on how to keep oneself get rid of the ill-effects of consuming unhealthy food. As a result of participating subject that schools and parents should cooperate to have a well-organized diner. Consequently, parents should restrict the working hours and concentrate on their children; sometimes they can their kids join in clubs as well as outdoor activities to blow off some steam of the studying pressure at school.
Beyond any doubt, it is obvious that not only parents and schools but also the whole society is responsible for shaping a healthy lifestyle for children. I hope that children all over the world will have a good diet and against the detrimental impacts of harmful diet in the long run
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'kids'' or 'kid's'?
Suggestion: kids'; kid's
..., there is a growing consensus that the kids regimen plays a fundamental role in inf...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, therefore, well, in general, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9706744868 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77560056822 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3237948124 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.071428571 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253016792777 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771822996004 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733126107103 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144980110156 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567583164104 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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