In many cities crime is increasing.
Why do you think this is happening?
What can governments do to help reduce crime rates?
Crime rate growth is a serious problem that many cities of the world are facing it. Unemployment and lack of the security could be the main problem. However, there are applicable solutions for them.
People who are unemployed and are not afraid of punishments due to the less secure society tend to commit crime. Those people may not have permanent work place and fixed income. As a result, they are likely to commit crimes such as shoplifting, burglary and mugging to cover the initial necessities. Because the punishments for the crimes are not strict enough, criminals retain posing a threat to society. For example, if people commit robbery or mugging, they are fined for a small amount of money in many cities. Thus, crime rate increasing and taking a heavy toll in those communities.
Nevertheless, the problems mentioned can be reduced by improving literacy rate and implementing draconian punishments. Governments should enhance the education system since the high level of unemployment stems from illiteracy. Provided that individuals gained useful skills and knowledge, they would occupy a well-paid profession. Another proper measurement is to legislate strict laws against committing crimes. For instance, community service and prison sentence are more serious punishments for those who are liable to commit a crime repeatedly. Even life sentence can be imposed on dangerous criminals, with the help of education as well as strict laws, the authorities could provide safety for the residents.
In conclusion, the drawbacks explained regarding the factors of crime rate growth can be reduced through proper education and strict penalties.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... be imposed on dangerous criminals, with the help of education as well as strict ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43023255814 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85095633887 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612403100775 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4897523768 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5625 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194744823762 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062808077914 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637239976298 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12830495289 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213089245563 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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