In many cities, there is little control on the design and construction of new houses. Some people think that people can choose to build houses in their own styles instead of building them with the same as the old house style in local areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent years, people’s life is becoming better and better, it leads to the fact that the demand of human on the design and construction of new house has changed. There are many streams of thoughts over the idea that people can build house in their style and do not need to follow the same style as old house in local areas. In my opinion, although it has many disadvantages but I believe that it brings more benefits.
On the one hand, some people believe that it has some negative factors such as safety and the effect on its surroundings. On important point is design is safety for own house and worker when a new house is built. Therefore, personal architect have experienced in design and construction. Another point should be taken into account is houses, apartments and other kinds of accommodation that are designed with bizarre exteriors should not be encouraged to rise. They may cause discomfort to locals.
On the other hand, there are many benefits effects on new house which is built on individual styles. Firstly, everyone has freely expressed their artistic sense so they can response on their design be responsible for the own design. For an example, architect creative more space for garden because own house like to ground green trees or combination of traditional style and model style to create new interested style. Indeed, it would definitely be better for everyone if they can build their own dream houses that fit their preferences and their budget. Secondly, if all houses look the same, it will be boring. That means each house has distinct style or different theme, it helps local areas be more colorful and interesting. In addition, these houses will attract many visitors to travel and enjoy nice architecture.
In conclusion, I can see that this is a complex issue as there are significant advantage and disadvantage to propose but I still believe that it is positive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90740740741 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64809778651 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552469135802 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0973573992 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.375 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466677449015 0.244688304435 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134107934603 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11541068991 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24820616237 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150554909799 0.056905535591 265% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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