In many countries good schools and medical facilities only available in cities. Some people believe that new teachers and doctors should work in rural area for few years, but some think everyone should be free to choose where they work,
Discuss both of these views and give your opinion
There is no doubt that primary facilities like educational institutes and hospitals are necessary. Although, some people believe that newly graduates should have no restriction to choose their workplace, I would argue that with own willingness they should give service for a few years in rural areas.
On one hand, those who advocate to have the liberty of choosing own place of endeavour may argue that new teachers and doctors cannot be enforced to take a job in any uncomfortable environment. This is because newly graduates require agreeable workspace to gain knowledge and confidence in their profession. For example, working in an uncomfortable atmosphere without comply could be dangerous and might create more harm than good. In contrast, if they make themselves comfortable in a countryside work area, it would give them the sense of giving back to society and happiness by aiding others.
On the other hand, my view is that helping underprivileged people is a paramount element of humanity. In villages, primary facilities like education and medical is highly affordable and by creating the willingness to work there, teachers and doctors can get the experience they require as well. Moreover, the government should start an initiation project to create enthusiasm in new doctors and professors. For instance, providing adequate housing facilities and giving them better remuneration can attract those professionals who are willing to work in rural areas. If, such steps are not taken into consideration, it will keep having inequality and injustice for primary necessities. However, without such steps it could lead the country for unstable society and economic instability.
In conclusion, despite the free will for working anywhere new teachers and doctors please, it is my firm belief that helping deprived people is an act of humanity and administration should spread cognizance for betterment of society and the region.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to own'
Suggestion: to own
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Line 5, column 788, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...table society and economic instability. In conclusion, despite the free will for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41914191419 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00019423756 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587458745875 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6136074807 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.307692308 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313237418543 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914397417836 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707536146555 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187065461545 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314327226988 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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