In many countries, the government prioritises economic growth above all other
concerns.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.
Economic growth is prioritized by the state in many nations and other issues are ignored. This essay will discuss the benefit of raising the living standards of citizens and the drawback of compromised civilian's health.
Increasing the level of economic growth brings more revenue to a country. Therefore, this money is used to open new business in a state and as a result more employment opportunities are provided to its people. This leads to more earnings by citizens by working in these organizations, and their living standards are uplifted as they use their earnings to purchase more material things to make their lives more comfortable, and the country becomes wealthy. For example, in 2005, India's economic growth was increased by 15%, as a result, the unemployment rate was declined by 2% compared to past 5 years.
The disadvantage of civilian's health sufferings from new emerging diseases is due to ignoring the healthcare system development. The government does not provide funds to this sector, and due to this, there is a lack of new technologies and new medicines to treat these new illnesses. As a result, people suffer more than before as they do not get the correct medicine. For instance, in 2020, due to fewer breathing machines in Indian hospitals, people are suffering a lot from new Covid-19 disease as Indian government ignored to purchase these machines in the past years.
In conclusion, although prioritizing the economic growth by a few states raises the living standards of their citizens, it also brings the drawback of citizen's health sufferings.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13565891473 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88552550438 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6658254223 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.454545455 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108730799395 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501347567508 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053653540969 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772926547056 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434422495119 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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