in many countries mainly tourist but not local people visit museum and historical site why does this happen and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places
In this present era, tourist businesses are increasing daily. In many nations, plenty of tourists visited museums and historical sites, but they were mostly from other countries. Local people cannot visit those places frequently. This essay will enshrine why this situation happens and also gives possible solutions for it, which describe in the following paragraphs.
To embarks with, there are numbers of reasons which creates these phenomena. First and foremost, local people have not enough information about museums, which located nearby their residents. Whereas foreign people have knowledge about those places, because of the Internet. Furthermore, the prices of tickets to visiting historical sites are much expensive, which local tourist cannot afford it. For example, the Taj Mahal is located in India, but 75% of Visitors of the Taj Mahal was not from India because of the prices of tickets, which was written in the Times of India.
On the other hand, these problems Can be solved with some steps. Firstly, if the government provides information about the culture by telecasting advertise, then people get knowledge of their culture and went to visit those places. Secondly, if the authority reduces the cost of tickets off historical buildings, then that places attract local people. For instance, the statue of unity is located in India Gujarat. there is no cost to visiting for the local public. And every weekend that place was full of local civilians.
To conclude, although local people visit museums and historical places of their country, foreign people visit the most than locals. this problem is generated because of a lack of knowledge and high cost, which will be solved by providing information and reducing cost.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, as for, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31046931408 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49492701682 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559566787004 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0600759932 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5294117647 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2941176471 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82352941176 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383723432404 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123021252729 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973900025684 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250101306828 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634065470538 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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