In many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subjects. What are causes? And what will be effects on society?
The idea of lacking science learners has been a topic of public interest. It seems to me that this trend may stem from excessive study load and fewer employment opportunities. As a result, this can lead to several detrimental impacts on society including the reduction of labor force and technological inventions related to this field in the future.
I reckon there have been two widely-observed factors leading to less students choosing science as their major. One of which is that such subjects are extremely more challenging and demanding compared to others, which require a large amount of time and effort to be spent on, gradually depriving many learners of their privacy. We can see this in the way that the majority of science graduates are said to conduct numerous experiments and complicated projects on a daily basis, which prevents them from having ample time to destress. Another reason is that learners may face the risk of unemployment in the light of the scarcity of occupation opportunities associated with this industry, this, in the long run, will make them no longer fascinated with scientific studies. In brief, the shortage of job chances and demanding a large deal of attempts plus patience are thought to be two major driving causes behind this phenomenon.
There are some severe influences on our society due to two aforementioned causes aside. First of all, there will be a decrease in the number of scientific human resources; however; the amount of job vacancies in other areas is limited, which is potentially resulting in the imbalance of future workforce and this can considerably put a strain on the community. In addition, with fewer scientific talents, our nation would be on the verge of curbing technological developments and breakthroughs, sooner and later exacerbating their living standard. In short, it appears that these aspects are assumed to directly restrict the country’s progress and cause the unemployment crisis.
In conclusion, a decline in students pursuing science may be as a result of high requirements of these subjects plus insufficient professions, and there are some negative consequences arising from these downsides.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun students is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... two widely-observed factors leading to less students choosing science as their majo...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... and cause the unemployment crisis. In conclusion, a decline in students pursu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, i reckon, in addition, in brief, in conclusion, in short, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26934097421 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03827630363 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578796561605 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.7071749923 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.461538462 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8461538462 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17441977521 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577558086336 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299181309854 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985104057105 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232348282924 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun students is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... two widely-observed factors leading to less students choosing science as their majo...
^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... and cause the unemployment crisis. In conclusion, a decline in students pursu...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, i reckon, in addition, in brief, in conclusion, in short, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26934097421 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03827630363 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578796561605 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.7071749923 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.461538462 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8461538462 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17441977521 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577558086336 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299181309854 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985104057105 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232348282924 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.