Many countries now face an economic downturn so it is better for each country to focus on its own problems rather than helping other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
In this complex world, most countries have to face a different kind of challenges. From that economic crisis in the country is the centre of controversy and absolutely necessary to aware in all around the world. It is good to help neighbour countries but before that, always a country must have more self-sufficient with their own economic stability
First and foremost, Any country which has economic issues should identify what kind of reasons are based on this matter and the central government should more aware and find out the solutions to get rid of economic crises which can happen in the future. In addition, many countries are rich in a lot of recourses that can be useful on behalf of their own soil, for example in Australia consist with a huge amount of gold and other valuable recourses are more than satisfied to grow the international market with a better economical prospect. However, in developed countries doesn’t have any resources, obviously need to find out other options to stabilize their economy. Secondly, I believe that the central government should organize a better plan along with other non-government organizations to conflict the burning problems in their own land. For instance, establishing more industrial areas which can help to increase the global market and rub shoulders with multinational industries and getting their ideas along with new technology will be important to expose to the world market. Apropos to the above given fact is definitely fix the economical crises and help to the country’s unemployment, illiteracy etc.
If the country consists of production capability and strong economical establishment then they can consider helping other neighbour countries to promote their productions and economical friendship between other countries to build up the foreign currency.
In conclusion, helping and supporting other countries when they are facing any economic issues are honourable action. But if the government is on economic problems in their own country it is better to focus and find out the solutions on the better prospect on behalf of their nation instead of helping other countries.
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...ion instead of helping other countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34795321637 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93691872619 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511695906433 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.6022778283 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.272727273 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0909090909 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292212924731 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125879604122 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636667617041 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207730422696 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523317633136 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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