In many countries, people are moving away from rural areas and toward urban areas.
Why do you think is that?
What problems can this cause?
In the last decade, we have seen a migration of people moving away from rural areas toward modern towns. In order to understand this trend, we need to explain reasons, effects and possible consequences.
The first reason for this phenomenon can be insufficient amount of the commodities or services, which are extremely necessary to sustain their life in rural areas. As well, lack of high standard medical services, which in terms of life are vital. For instance, living in these areas appears to be not difficult due to the use of natural products; however, these products need to pass several process of purifying to become clear and natural. To conduct certain processes the machines require some elements that can break, lost, or stolen, depending on the circumstances. This situation may lead to consequences such as the appearance of diseases among people, the panic of the residents in advance or suffering of the animals.
The second reason is that globalization regarding cities is spreading much faster than those from rural areas. Urban towns are becoming more developed from all angles due to the sponsorship from the government or different organizations from the other countries. These investors tend to contribute their money in towns rather than rural areas because of the lack of potential profit of the latter. One living in rural area are not only prompted to move toward the towns but also have to leave their relatives, friends and even sell their cattle.
The trend of moving toward urban areas from rural may lead to the declination of the cattle’s quality, which provide people with meat, as well as the reduce of the agriculture.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... effects and possible consequences. The first reason for this phenomenon can...
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...dvance or suffering of the animals. The second reason is that globalization ...
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...friends and even sell their cattle. The trend of moving toward urban areas f...
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...ch provide people with meat, as well as the reduce of the agriculture.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'as to', 'for instance', 'such as', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241830065359 0.247107183377 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.137254901961 0.155533422707 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104575163399 0.0946595960268 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0490196078431 0.0501214627716 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0196078431373 0.0437548338989 45% => OK
Prepositions: 0.143790849673 0.122226691241 118% => OK
Participles: 0.0359477124183 0.0403226058552 89% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70663194126 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0457516339869 0.0326793684256 140% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.104575163399 0.0861772015684 121% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0130718954248 0.021408717616 61% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0130718954248 0.011925033212 110% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1683.0 1933.35771543 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 316.048096192 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.14233576642 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.357664233577 0.374742101984 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.259124087591 0.28420135186 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.186131386861 0.203846283523 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138686131387 0.137316102897 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70663194126 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.037074148 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583941605839 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 61.3323186813 60.7387585426 101% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 22.8333333333 20.7743622355 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9151898403 49.517814964 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.25 127.492653851 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7743622355 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.16666666667 0.814263465372 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 48.7457420925 49.1944974215 99% => OK
Elegance: 2.04761904762 1.69124875643 121% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200661376536 0.332605444948 60% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105492652791 0.102741220458 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0532796210584 0.0668466124924 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.597864621843 0.534860350844 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152357258877 0.148594505496 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106169442373 0.134430193775 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633302953838 0.0742795772207 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.383122658691 0.324371583561 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0643880996353 0.0638462369009 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163297198463 0.228012699653 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522780513915 0.058150111329 90% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.