Many schools are facing to difficulties in educating students’ behaviour. This essay will discuss the reasons behind negative behaviour of some student and some measures that governments, schools and parents can take to tackle this issue.
One of the most important cause affecting student behaviour is the lack of care and guidance from parents. Nowadays, many parents are busy with their works and they do not have enough time and skills to teach their children. Besides, some people believe that schools have responsible for student education, while there are too students that teachers cannot take care of all of them. Moreover, TV and Internet are main entertainments of modern students so they influence of the things that shown in social media and the Internet. However, many programs are not suitable for children such as those films have a lot of violent scenes, even there are websites that encourage children to commit suicide.
Those problems will be solved successfully if parents spend a lot of time on their children. Therefore, they will understand their children’s strengths and weaknesses and give appropriate orientations. Furthermore, Government should monitor and manage the content of websites and social media. This is because Internet affects student psychology while parents and schools do not control all time students use computer.
In conclusion, the development of students are important to family and social, so parents and schools need to take care of behaviour of students. Therefore, schools should coordinate with parents in terms of making discipline the children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rms of making discipline the children.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.468 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85180925028 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4240572989 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.153846154 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211053575412 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795975482985 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542919104715 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139552584659 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455774316194 0.056905535591 80% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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