In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that government should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
It would be argued that salaries should not be allowed to cross a certain level. In my opinion, however, earning high incomes may benefit societies.
Those who do not want high salaries to appear because this may cause a number of problems. One of the main issues is the appearance of the gap between rich and poor as beside high income families, there are various individuals who have their lives below the poverty line. These income disparities can demotivate workers who feel that the situation is unfair. Therefore, two incompatible sides appear in societies, which would cause economic imbalance and poverty and crime rates are likely to rise.
However, I would argue that there are various reasons why it might be considered beneficial to allow people to be pair extremelt high salaries. Firstly, these well-paif employees are likely to be highly motivated to work hard and therefore drive their businesses successfully. This should Result in a thriving economy and increased taxes revenues. Moreover, some usually fundraise for charities working in medical research or education. This has promoted pharmacy developement and enabled poor students to enter schools. As a result, the proportions of death and illiteracy have significantly decreased.
In conclusion, although earning high salaries is not always beneficial, I personally think that the advantages of this issue outweighed the drawbacks in the long term.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03543307087 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75964214341 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610236220472 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1196026813 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3846153846 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7692307692 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246317886212 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799154859864 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518330671718 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145294059976 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194882385543 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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