Over the past decade, getting enormous salaries for a group of talented people has become a prevalent and publicly recognized phenomenon. Although some people argue that should introduce a limited wage below an acceptable range, I would support for the perspective that people should be paid a properly high salary in accordance with their effort.
On one hand, imposing a frame of salary appear to have better opportunities for people have more definitely good work environment and reducing the gap-pay among employees. In fact, working in that environment workers exposed to extremely fair working style and culture. Such condition will help employees not only having an obviously comfortable mood, but also focusing on their working for better result efficiently. Besides, narrowing the disparity between the rich and the poor is one of the considerably important target that the government aim. Consequently, this will lead to reducing the rate of poverty and prime since they are climax for those problems.
On the flip side, receiving in line with what people previously dedicated is play primarily significant role in the development of a country in general and a company in particular. Firstly, apparently getting extremely high salary will get workers have better motivation to devote their effort to their company and nation. As a result, this would obviously lead to achieve acquisitions as well as achievements for the company and the individuals. For example, Lionel Messi is one of the football player got the highest wage in over the world, but the return is highly justifiable with extremely priceless economy for the FC Barcelona club and Argentina country. In addition, owing to receiving more money from salary, the employees would considerably contributed to the national budget via tax and other payments. Such money help the national authorities would provide more subsidies for poverty and disable people by erecting more high quality infrastructures and shelters. Hence, repelling the rate of diseases and social imbalance that are a hugely serious problem in almost developing countries.
In conclusion, although having considerably well-paid salaries for several gifted people comes at a cost, I agree that the return will be highly appreciated if the government can managing and paying the properly high wages in agreement with the efficiency of the workers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 752, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'contribute'
Suggestion: contribute
...alary, the employees would considerably contributed to the national budget via tax and othe...
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Line 3, column 826, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'helps'.
Suggestion: helps
... via tax and other payments. Such money help the national authorities would provide ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in general, in particular, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2017.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39304812834 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8777867555 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561497326203 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9770647295 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.466666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210420215767 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066350880197 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450345355058 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136714397752 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394309254047 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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