In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In today’s society, people hold various views as to whether or not the government should adopt maximum wage legislation. Whereas there are persuasive arguments to the contrary, it is my personal belief that everyone is allowed to earn as much as they can.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why it could be argued that the government should enact a maximum wage law. Firstly, it would narrow the pay gap between the highest and lowest earners. Accordingly, this decline in income inequality will have beneficial effects on many firms and companies since a huge sum of money can be allocated to other areas such as promotion or marketing, which helps raise sales figures. Secondly, employees are discouraged from working harder if some people are unfairly offered extraordinarily high pay packages. As a result, this can lead to decreased quality of life in some parts of society and pose a threat to the sustainable development of the entire country.
On the other hand, I agree with those who believe that the nation would suffer from setting a limit on earnings. To embark on, if people are dissatisfied with their low income, they are more likely to be pushed to work in a country where they earn a good salary. Consequently, this brain drain will adversely affect many domestic companies as the absence of a well-educated and skilled workforce will cause a loss of thousands of dollars, resulting in a sluggish economy. Furthermore, if the maximum wage law is abolished, more talented workers, who make significant contributions, are attracted and therefore help to drive a business successfully.
By way of conclusion, although there are compelling reasons to claim that a maximum wage cap is crucial, I reaffirm my position that the government should not set a limit on the wages of higher earners as this can provoke severe impacts on the economic system.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ers, who make significant contributions, are attracted and therefore help to driv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, as to, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99680511182 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86370001869 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603833865815 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.0179706901 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.333333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0833333333 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1675577257 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547883767044 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038984442931 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954999566269 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292424340796 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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