In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Salaries are the basic need of any employee that given after a month or by completing the contract. According to many nations a very low number of people earn highest salaries, some other supposed that it is well being for country but other point of view is that totally opposed them they think governments should not allows salaries from a specific level.
Firstly, people that have extremely high earnings give potential to their country and then as a reward they get maximum source of income as compared to that employee who did not work well. It is good for the country because talented employee give own hundred percent to the welfare of company and convey good ideas to their bosses and get rumination from own company, as a result their ideas introduce in markets and they are beneficial economically for the country.
secondly, the people that opposed and believe that salaries are given at specific level not more than that it is totally injustice for people who work hard. Many intelligent people can not serve their nation free of cost they want to get appreciation and good rumination from governments in the form of good salaries.
By proceeding the statement, i am totally agreed it is good for our country that talented people serve the mankind and nation and governments should give maximum portion of pay to them.
In a conclusion, governments should not restrict in the case of payment to the employees at specific level. They should encourage and enhance the the talent of own country. They must be support them and it is helpful for the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'earn the highest'.
Suggestion: earn the highest
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'allow'
Suggestion: allow
... them they think governments should not allows salaries from a specific level. Firs...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...ficial economically for the country. secondly, the people that opposed and believe th...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...laries. By proceeding the statement, i am totally agreed it is good for our co...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86617100372 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51238416322 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494423791822 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.6014164164 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.9 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372154771962 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139645550385 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093093448923 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207476389038 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790458256619 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.