in many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries, some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
Some people put forth the argument that it is good for the country if some people are highly paid while on the other hand some people think it is the government’s responsibility not to allow salaries above certain level. I would like to discuss both these viewpoints.
Undeniably, people in some of the countries are highly paid for their jobs and this has a great benefit in collecting revenue for the government. For instance, in Asian countries like Pakistan, people are paid according to their basic pay scale and this scale is made according to the qualifications set by the government. 22 percent tax is deducted from monthly income of the employees. This tax is the basic revenue for the government which is used for the infrastructure and the development of the country.
Similarly, if people are highly paid, the more revenue would be collected which is ultimately used for the betterment of the society. Despite of this, some people think it is the chief responsibility of the government not to allow salaries above certain level. I think it has two basic impacts on the society, first is the discrimination and second is the increased crime rate. However, differences in the salaries create discriminations and this leads to social distancing. For instance, in Pakistan this trend is growing very rapidly. People with high salaries try to avoid company of those who are less paid and consider themselves as superior which makes other people suffer from inferiority complex. This inferiority complex gives rise to other complications like the health problems and the most prevalent are depression, and anxiety. Secondly, when one is not able to secure his or her family needs than crime starts. For instance, people get involve in robbery, theft, human trafficking, and drugs’ smuggling to earn more money and to become superior in society’s eyes. Apart from this people are also found to be involved in channelizing this money for terrorist activities, which they conduct to take revenge because of discrimination. This all happens to vent their frustration against the population.
While concluding, in my opinion everyone has conscious and everyone should think in a positive way while on the other hand, government should also keep a balance between white and blue collar persons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 23, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...hese viewpoints. Undeniably, people in some of the countries are highly paid for their job...
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Line 3, column 1090, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... superior in society’s eyes. Apart from this people are also found to be involved in...
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Line 4, column 82, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...has conscious and everyone should think in a positive way while on the other hand, government sho...
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Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... between white and blue collar persons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, while, apart from, for instance, i think, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1329787234 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90693800968 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518617021277 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8080139139 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.222222222 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.454804704719 0.244688304435 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130182578597 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145949643067 0.0667982634062 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279622333443 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147465399252 0.056905535591 259% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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