In many countries ,teaching foreign language to primary school students is essential. do you think the advantage of teaching a foreign language to young learns autweght the disadvantage ?
Foreign language is increasing day by day. Many students start departing education of foregin language. The young children during their primary education. It is more important for all people. I discuss both views in upcoming paragraphs? To commence with benefits of foreign language, children can learn many things in early age. They learn new skills. At this receptive age, children grasp the roots of any skill which can help them to be proficient at latter age. For instance, children are taught English from their oneodotes. Childern speak the English language easily. They can study in foregin language. Kids make the future in foreign country.they improve reading skills and communication skills. They can speak the other language in early age. Furthermore,i think,students use the foreign language. They can study due technology. Children who learn new vocabulary words. They learning foreign language at the stage of life.students to explore the language at early age which will support to storage at vocabulary and grammatical part of language. However, english is second language. Many students go to foreign country. They can learn other skills. Learning additional language needs costant practice at school and home if parent's are not good at foreign language studying by kid. it has many mental pressure and disturbance for children. They use foreign language . At last, many children learn language to primary school. I think both are advantages or disadvantage foreign language to to studying other countrie .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, second, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43459915612 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78546095615 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544303797468 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 20.2975951904 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0931239989 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.52 106.682146367 48% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.48 20.7667163134 46% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.2 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 3.4128256513 469% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311785368649 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101080592967 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995413502281 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311785368649 0.151304729494 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.34 50.2224549098 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.44 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 9.78957915832 36% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 10.1190380762 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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