In many countries, TV programmes are available 24 hours a day. Some people believe this has a positive outcome for people while others say the effect is negative. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are several people in many countries who believe that programmes on TV that run all day has a positive result whereas others think that the outcome is negative. While there could be benefits from TV availability 24 hours a day, there are also possible drawbacks that could be derived. In my opinion, news channels and some entertainment shows should be readily available any time of the day; however, it should not be indulged by children.
Throughout the era of television, it has been of so much help to the viewers. There are many uses that TV has to offer when top channels are ready to view. The fundamental one is about news, wherein there are a lot of information that people have to know locally and internationally, especially during climate and weather updates. Due to the time difference, many countries are eager to know what is going on. For example, a typhoon has affected one particular country and there is a possibility that it will travel to the nearest area, thus, news update in this critical time is desperately needed and crucial information must be disseminated to the people right away for preparation.
Furthermore, there are nocturnal people that seek entertainment in the holy hours of the night or early morning. It would be beneficial if there are channels that stream from midnight to midday as many people have different sleeping patterns because of the nature of work. For some workers in the graveyard shift, perhaps a little ongoing show during breaks could kills the sleepiness and boredom.
Finally, as there are shows that stream live such as global competitions in sports and pageants, the availability of television on that particular time is necessary due to the tons of supporters viewing all around the world. When Miss Universe 2018 Catriona Gray won the competition, her kin from Australia and Philippines cannot help but turn the TV on whatever the time that it showed.
On the other hand, although there are many positive aspects from the availability of the TV all day, it should be controlled from the hands of the children as there are only certain time that kiddie shows are on air.
Therefore, the positive outcome of the television being available 24 hours outweigh the few negative results.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sperately needed and crucial information must be disseminated to the people right...
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'kill'
Suggestion: kill
...little ongoing show during breaks could kills the sleepiness and boredom. Finally, a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, as to, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93421052632 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76337718428 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.0529115113 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297495837327 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093170707235 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756551804757 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145858223161 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768956052761 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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