Many government think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
government is supposed to benefit the public and work as an administration department. The main goal of its work contains both economic progress and other types of progress such as city construction and health-care.
As the figure of GDP stands for something, many people believe that the most important goal is to make economic progress. Obviously, a city under good economic statistics is likely to offer a better life to citizen. However, I would rather take the other opinion because there are more things to care about besides economic development. our happiness does not depend on money only, it is determined by many invisible conditions that we can feel every day. For example, a rich man live in a community where pollution flows in front of houses will not be happy at all. What is more, the quality of life will not be secured under a poor health-care system. On the opposite, if citizens do not need to worry about environment, health and housing, then money does not seem so useful to them.
Clinton, the ex-president of America, once said that the figure of economic progress cannot represent happiness. Breathing fresh air arises our sense of happiness, receiving high quality education enhances our sense of happiness, and so will, enjoying good foods do. These feelings could not be replaced by lifting economic figures. After all, we live in a world measured not only in economic method.
All in all, government should stress on offering good lives rather than improving economic status only. there are more things beyond money that matter to life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, then, after all, for example, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01526717557 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67284601527 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63358778626 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6519959644 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.6 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192567039428 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617050199152 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789664735331 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112171068483 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616742435198 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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