Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Economic progress are main target of every government. But some view opposite of this point,they prefer that other kind of development also important in nation. This essay will give detail why economic progress nessary and give some reason why another sector also need attention of country.
There are several reason why nation provide more preferences to economic progress. Firstly, Government spent heavy amount of money on education, road transport and industrialisation which return tax to government and develop job opportunity for citizen. This step rise up the standar of living of the people. Manufacturing sector are the biggest example of labour, which hire numerous employees to each year. Therefore, Government should spend money on economic progress because it returns highest amount of revenue.
On the other hand, we can say that many other sectors also have need money for progress such as social welfare and environment pollution. Government should arrange free cost of accommodation and hospitality, whom cannot effort it as well as should take many step for increasing standard of living like pension and insurance. Other factors is safety of environmental which is harmful by vehicle and industry. Polluted vehicle engine should be banned and spend revenue on nature friendly vehicle such as electronic and water car. Therefore, if government would take strick action against that industry which produces poison in atmosphere and do investment in cleaning polluted water, as result this problem will vanish in the world.
In the conclusion, I think that both sector have require country help. So government should give similar importance to both. If they want to develop human progress.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...cannot effort it as well as should take many step for increasing standard of living like ...
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...nclusion, I think that both sector have require country help. So government should give...
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...should give similar importance to both. If they want to develop human progress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, well, i think, kind of, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45112781955 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74625539718 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616541353383 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.8943743434 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.625 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264679148022 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083662146162 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565740263175 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170087512566 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603508170293 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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