Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state . Do you agree or disagree
Major of people think that money should not save in bank. In fact it should spent on need, as a result people would not pay any tax to country. Still number of people are opposite of this view. This essay will explain the some benefits of the saving habit in human life.
There are several reason why saving habit is necessary for people. First of all, tax is the main source of revenue which takes from human saving. Government spent this money on economic development such as road transport sport, , industry, hospital, old age pension and so on. Therefore if people would spend all money on wealth lifestyle, than state cannot help the poor people.
Secondly, Nation spends the heavy amount of money on military which collects citizen through tax. Generally, army use this money for buying weapon from another country which is beneficial in war-time and protection of border. For example, this year Indian prime minister purchased expensive new technology weapon from America, Russia and Japan. Thirdly, every state pass special package for welfare scheme which helpful for poor generation such as free cost of higher education offer that student who cannot afford it and give free books and computer. Furthermore, Government have constructed many hospital where patient can do treatment free of cost and give free medicine. So people should try to save money in bank for personal purpose as well as country's overall development.
In the conclusion, I am completely disagree with this statement because tax are the only revenue of state's income. If people expend all money how country will develop.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, third, thirdly, well, for example, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05283018868 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38964414047 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645283018868 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2830229181 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6875 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217209804571 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750149635794 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060368508169 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144325240122 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450042213411 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.