English is becoming popular as a global. Do you advantage outweigh the disadvantage.

Essay topics:

English is becoming popular as a global. Do you advantage outweigh the disadvantage.

nowadays, English language has taken an international position globally which make communication essay, however, local language are decreasing their important in society cause of an international language. In this paragraph, I will explain two reasons of benefit of global language and explain the effect of it on local language.

First and foremost point is that all world has become small village cause of global language where we can communicate with everyone, specially for business man who can buy and sell item with abroad without any difficulties, as a result people can spend their business as a world level. Secondly, education system is also developed because student go to another country for taking better education, reason of English language which make communication essay in education. For example, my brother is doing M.B.A in Canada, he adopt their culture and language easily because he has read English language as second language in India.

On the other hand,we cannot forget the negative effect of this language, mostly people forget their local language cause of craze of modern communication as result it biggest effect on our culture learning.
In conclusion, both language are significant part of the our world, although English language play necessary role in friendship of two separate cultural nation

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nowadays
nowadays, English language has taken an internat...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
.... For example, my brother is doing M.B.A in Canada, he adopt their culture and l...
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Line 3, column 509, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
.... For example, my brother is doing M.B.A in Canada, he adopt their culture and l...
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Line 3, column 525, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'adopts'.
Suggestion: adopts
...my brother is doing M.B.A in Canada, he adopt their culture and language easily becau...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
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...language in India. On the other hand,we cannot forget the negative effect of th...
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Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'it the biggest'.
Suggestion: it the biggest
...craze of modern communication as result it biggest effect on our culture learning. In co...
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Line 6, column 54, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
..., both language are significant part of the our world, although English language play n...
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Line 6, column 154, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'nation' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'nations'.
Suggestion: nations
... in friendship of two separate cultural nation
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42307692308 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7828026133 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610576923077 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.8266427329 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.142857143 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7142857143 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.1428571429 7.06120827912 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0879906944661 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439511379179 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.02152488961 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0496512847037 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332441513754 0.056905535591 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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