The money given to help poor countries does not solve the problem of poverty, so rich countries should give other types of help instead. To what extent do agree or disagree.
Wealth country always ready to help poor country, although, some view that rich nation offer other alternative to people for rising the standard of life instead of financial support. I completely agree with this statement, this essay will explain the evidence how second possibility better than first choice and give details which place money can help to nation.
There are several alternative for using wealth country's donation on right place though providing services such as free treatment in hospital, specially for developing and under developing nation. Generally, Government may send well-educated doctor in that nation where their need as well as nation may give expensive machinery and medicine to financial week citizen of nation in free cost. Furthermore, education is main root of success of every nation. Therefore, independent country should give preferences to study and established school and universities where offer education with the support of latest technology instance of computer, i-pad and so on
On the other hand, major of country have need money for making better life of citizen. Firstly, every country want to build better road, rail and air transport which have require huge money, if rich territory support financially to that country, they can fund the money to internal development of nation. For example, Japan has contributed one lakh crore to in for making high-speed rail for running bullet train.
In conclusion, wealth Kingdom should personally invest money on particular service which have need the nation and not providing only money.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'alternatives'?
Suggestion: alternatives
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Suggestion: of the latest
... where offer education with the support of latest technology instance of computer, i-pad ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gy instance of computer, i-pad and so on On the other hand, major of country have...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...road, rail and air transport which have require huge money, if rich territory support f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42682926829 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64632897478 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617886178862 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9727140276 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.333333333 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.3333333333 7.06120827912 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189760480292 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787456147885 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682051494018 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119297444789 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563442162977 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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