Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal some people however think that other types of progress are equally important for a country

Essay topics:

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.

Every country has their own way to think about their development. Although, several governments give more priority to economic progress instead of other department. however, public think that other sections are equally significant for nation development. I believe, economic progress is not merely crucial. government should look after other departments such as social, political and educational.
economic development is one of the most favourite topic of government but they can not ignore other departments on pretext of enhance our economic. people want good quality of education for their scintillating future, organised political system and amicable social welfare programmes. however, of any country has remarkable education system then it helps to progress them in all fields. For, instance, literate people can work more efficiently than the illiterate people and smart public have solutions of all problems. Moreover, good political system helps to develope the nation rapidly and precisely.
if rules and regulations of the country are right then discipline should support among people.In addition, it is very significant to framing laws for security, people also exercise their fundamental rights without any fear. For example, security of women is big issue nowadays in society. so, if governments applied some strict rules against harassment, rape or physical abuse. As a result, crime rate against women will be reduced and everyone has fear in their mind of punishment.
In conclusion,government should work on economic progress but they should give equal importance to other type of problems too. so, public will enjoy equally.

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Average: 6.8 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64516129032 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96101753962 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0329688273 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309269375369 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868611175884 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723491330856 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178584204801 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870664679135 0.056905535591 153% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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