Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Essay topics:

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are different views between governments and people about measuring the progress of countries. Government believe that economic growth is important to a country, while people think there are still other types of progress are as significant as economic progress. I, personally, agree with the point that growth in other aspects is also important.

It has several reasons that economic growth is the first priority for governments. Firstly, a well economy can bring ample opportunities of jobs to people, a high level of employment and also high salaries. Therefore, it can effectively improve the lifestyle of some people who are in poverty. Secondly, there would be more money for governments to spend on manufacturing infrastructure and public services which lead people to a more convenient life. Thirdly, trading power influences the position of nations on the global stage, so a good economy bringing commercial prospects to countries can raise the country’s standing.

However, it is often argued that it exists various progress that governments should also put it at the same status comparing with economic growth. The treatment to the minority of people is also a measure of progress for a country because it reflects whether a country equips well social welfare state which means people are living in a moral society. Besides, the environment issues are as enormous as the above on the grounds that it represents that not only residents but also wildlife in a country have a suitable living quality. Also, a well healthcare system can prevent citizens from epidemic so that there are no worries about the lack of working labours which results in economic rundown.

To sum up, although economic growth is important to countries, there are still other types of progress having the same status as economic progress.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...g the progress of countries. Government believe that economic growth is important to a ...
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Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Government) must be used with a third-person verb: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...g the progress of countries. Government believe that economic growth is important to a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, third, thirdly, well, while, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26530612245 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82846802794 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5134611173 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.076923077 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235119784248 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882545152006 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108582670504 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176049407374 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108407309259 0.056905535591 191% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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