Many parents choose to teach their children at home rather than sending their children to school, do you think the benefits of homeschooling outweigh its drawbacks?
Many people believe that home schooling is a better way to develop their children than sending to school. While this tendency is beneficial to some extent, I would argue that it has more disadvantages.
On the one hand, studying at home has several advantages for children. Firstly, due to lack of financial conditions and convenient transportations, parents living in isolated areas just can teach their children at home. This helps their children to be literate and have opportunities to earn well-paid job in future. Secondly, because parents are most familiar with their children having diverse abilities, parents can select custom-tailored education, which fits them. For example, children who are not good at mathematics have more time to learn this subject than literature when learning at home with their parents. If children go to school, they might struggle to keep up learning speed of their classmates.
On the other hand, I believe that studying at school enables children to grow better both academically and mentally. First, since teachers are professionally well-trained, they know the common sense of education and can summarize core of knowledge. This allows children receiving traditional education are likely to excel academically. Additionally, school with a large number of students are considered miniature society, which helps students to communicate and associate with their peers. As a result, they could develop comprehensively with more confidence and group experience to tackle life’s challenges when they go into adulthood.
In conclusion, while teaching children at home can have several advantages, I believe that its drawbacks are greater.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57421875 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08697322413 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61328125 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6395346841 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.928571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371586217155 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133935854311 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990910365856 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233546204304 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849203046298 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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