many parents complained about to violence promoter to their children through video game tv programs and other media why is it happening what can be the solution for it

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, while, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51546391753 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86023288626 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625429553265 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 217.689068656 49.4020404114 441% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 229.285714286 106.682146367 215% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.5714285714 20.7667163134 200% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.7142857143 7.06120827912 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 57.0 5.01903807615 1136% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262308202081 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104611203626 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591714390022 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149868711889 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329726184995 0.056905535591 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.4 13.0946893788 194% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.4 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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