Many parents these days work in other countries, taking their families with them. Do you think advantages of the development outweigh its disadvantages?
It is true that many nuclear families have a tendency to move to the another country to be settled. While I accept that there are some disadvantages, I think that these are outweighed by the advantages of this trend.
On the one hand, there are certainly some negative impacts when living in other countries. Firstly, they have to face with many problems such as language, the way of life, and the cutural gap between the two countries. For instance, Thao who is a Vietnamese people, followed her parents to Germany, because of the barrier of language, she was falling behind with her studies.as a result, she was given the bad scores in the important examinations. Secondly, the high standard of living is not an easy purpose of reaching, particularly in the developed countries. The health insurance, transportation fees, and tuitions for children cost them a great deal, so it is hard for overseas people to make ends meet.
On the other hand, I believe that there are great benefits to be gained. One reason is that their children could have a brighter future as it granted them counless opportunities to develop in the advanced educational system. The tranmission of knowledge in the Western countries are much more practical and efficient compared to others; thus; kids would being the comprehensive development both physical and academic education. In addition, they would be obtained the real experience of the different culture and custom. Take Thailand as an example, if they live there, they will have a chance to watch the shows of transgender models. They can understand the difficulties of these people, so they show much more positive attitudes towards transexual man and women.
In conclusion, the positive effects of many families migrate to different countries has more than compensated for the drawbacks.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88185704017 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596666666667 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9990666892 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.214285714 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2142857143 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19470869968 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597283842378 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407738145669 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11103356385 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419642407097 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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