In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. What are the causes? How should these young criminals be punished?
In many countries, it is a cautious phenomenon that juvenile delinquency has increased significantly. Young offenders not only burden the victims but also threaten the safety of the community. Many efforts have already been made to reduce the proportion of adolescent crime, but the effect is not quite satisfactory at all. In this essay, I will discuss the causes of teenage crimes and illustrate relevant measures to solve this problem.
To begin with, the growth of criminals committed by teenagers comes from numerous reasons. First and foremost, the worsening family environment associated with lack of care and upbringing from them may affect young offenders' life in the near future. It is true that many families in this contemporary society have parents who always have to pay attention to work, promotion, and their income almost all the time. They tend to have less time to look after and care for their kids. As a result, growing up in such an environment, in most cases, these vulnerable teenagers are more likely to be willful and cynical. Hence, they may be caused by some mental syndromes like personality or post-traumatic stress disorders. Consequently, they are more easily led astray and can become perilous criminals. To illustrate, according to the Ministry of Public Security in Vietnam, 25% of offenders that commit serious crimes such as murder and rape, are most often young psychopaths, who suffer from mental illnesses at a very young age. Furthermore, social media is widely believed to play a vital role in this issue. Today, young people are bombarded by violence, drugs, sexual harassment via the Internet, and a number of socially online applications. These mental poisons have been seriously corrupting adolescents' innocent minds and arousing violent impulses.
Considering the alarming situation of juvenile crimes, it is about time that several effective measures of punishment need to be adapted as soon as possible. First, the government should promulgate a plethora of restrictions to strengthen the censorship of the commercialized mass media. In other words, they are obligated to strictly penalize some websites or TV stations that disseminate vulgar and cruel information. Therefore, teenagers can stay away from those toxic contents. Another solution is that, as for numerous habitual young perpetrators, it is feasible to sentence them to life imprisonment, which is an efficient way for rebellious kids to reshape their moral values. These methods not only provide a safe environment for citizens, but they also exert a deterrent effect on some potential lawbreakers. Additionally, young offenders who suffer from various mental syndromes should be forced to participate in psychological courses at penitentiaries. If they clearly show changes in attitude, the length of punishments may be considered to declining. Last but not least, parents have to assume the responsibility of educating and guiding their kids. They can tell children about so many criminal cases and their sentences, which can have a strong influence on their son or daughter and discourage them from committing crimes and lead them to be potentially dangerous lawbreakers.
In summary, juvenile crime is increasing day by day due to a lack of upbringing from parents and negative influence from social media. As a consequence, appropriate punishment should be meted out by the government and parents to bring more safety to the public. At the same time, adolescents should establish the right life outlook.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teenagers'' or 'teenager's'?
Suggestion: teenagers'; teenager's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'offenders'' or 'offender's'?
Suggestion: offenders'; offender's
...d upbringing from them may affect young offenders life in the near future. It is true tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, as for, in summary, such as, as a result, in most cases, in other words, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 41.998997996 190% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2977.0 1615.20841683 184% => OK
No of words: 555.0 315.596192385 176% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36396396396 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85370353223 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01197458652 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 311.0 176.041082164 177% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56036036036 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 937.8 506.74238477 185% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8609522117 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.321428571 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8214285714 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 18.0 3.9879759519 451% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254091262267 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578012426451 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446766842006 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151335959124 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217761153267 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 174.0 78.4519038076 222% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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