In many parts of the world, some famous people are considered ‘role models', and they are having an increasing influence on the young. Is this a positive or negative development?
Celebrities are becoming new role models for young people in different regions of the world. In my opinion, this phenomenon has a positive impact and I will explain the reasons in this essay.
Famous people can be a motivation for many young individuals to thrive in their career paths. There are celebrated people who have inspired the younger generation through their achievements in different fields such as art, music and science. Taylor Swift, for example, is an inspirational singer and songwriter who has motivated her fans to follow their goals with dedication and passion through her journey to success. Many other successful celebrities in other fields are also inspiring young fans to work hard in their lives through their paths to achieve success.
Another benefit of this development is that it can encourage young people to break boundaries regardless of any difficulties to pursue their aims. Disabled athletes winning first place in different competitions such as swimming or running can be role models for young individuals with the same disabilities to keep their confidence to overcome obstacles. Despite her cerebral palsy, wheelchair racer Kare Adenegan won three medals with her debut in The Paralympics 2016, thereby becoming an inspiration for other young disabled athletes to follow their dreams regardless of any boundaries. These role models’ influence on the younger generation can be encouraging for them in making breakthroughs in their lives.
In conclusion, this phenomenon can influence young individuals positively because these successful celebrities not only motivate them to thrive, but also encourage them to overcome challenges to accomplish their dreams.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54789272031 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91201854871 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563218390805 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3518440853 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.636363636 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208101509352 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954179207487 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521451281282 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143650015818 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549359592145 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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