In many parts of the world, there is continuous coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sports themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with that statement?
In many parts of the world, there is continuous coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sports themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with that statement?
Sport on television programs is the most popular all over the world. It is often assumed that watching too much of these forms of leisure can lead to a reduction in sports reality participation. From my viewpoint, I partly agree with this statement because of time-consuming, and disagree due to the advantage of generating motivation for viewers to join in sports.
On the one hand, watching games in an elongated time can make less time available for actually playing physical games. In detail, excessive time in a day is used for watching due to the thick appearance of attractive games and the spectators can literally follow them most of their days. Thus, they leading to no time left to join in training activities or competitions, which demand various time investments. Furthermore, when people watch too many sports game programs, they may experience an inferior feeling by comparing themselves with other sport talented.
By contrast, watching sport may prompt some young generations to engage in sports and that also be an effective way to evoke passion with these games. to more specific, to look good and feeling of winning in the crowd, people want to get more admire and being well-known. Television programs make us feel that they would become more active by sports training. As a result, youth gently being persuaded to take part in sports gaming, health could be enhanced in both physical and mental aspects and remove health issues.
In conclusion, although I agree that watching games promote young's participation in sports, I also hold a belief that watching broadcast competition highly being a wasted job by consuming time outrageously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, if, look, may, so, thus, well, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11313868613 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81359404873 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616788321168 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9748917876 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.75 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220810176314 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802242725754 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689552728522 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128853598375 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761773754671 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.