in the future all cars buses and trucks will be driverless the only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages

Essay topics:

in the future, all cars buses, and trucks will be driverless. the only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers.
do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

It is expected in the near future that all running vehicles such as cars, buses, and trucks would be driverless. Thus, there would be no driver and only passengers inside the vehicle. From my perspective, the benefits of the development overperform that of the negative.
On the one hand, driverless cars provide the advantages for humans having it, in order to address their traffic errors, leading to a decline in accidents. There is a truth that when citizens drive, their concentration gradually decreased over a long time by driving consistently. Thus, the lack of attention in using transports is increasing and following by numerous unexpected accidents such as self-crashes which bring up serious effects on our physical health. In contrast, driverless cars require little or non-human input can prevent humans from making errors and no longer cause public traffic crashes, resulting in better road safety.
On the order hand, in case of accidents, the priority concern is about the legal liability is unclear that could be considered the main negativity of the driverless cars. The fact that when the conventional cars accidents, the driver would take legal liability to compensate for all bad circumstances. however, because the driverless cars just transport passengers and the question raised when accidents occur is that who would take its responsibility, no one to blame in this case. As a result, there is not sufficient legal protection for those who are involved.
To conclude, as the development of the driverless car in this day and maybe popular in future, there is still conflict between the benefits and drawback of that types of transporting. However, I trust that the advantages of these vehicles could overperform the disadvantages because they bring about better road safety. The government can figure out a solution in order to eliminate that downside.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 85, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...rless car in this day and maybe popular in future, there is still conflict between the be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, so, still, thus, in contrast, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22082018927 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95448056485 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552050473186 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.107885364 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.307692308 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235980612172 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800876020354 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857969034882 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153627396311 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792933592812 0.056905535591 139% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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