In the future, all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers.
Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
In the future, all vehicles like cars and buses will be without drivers and will run automatically without someone driving them. in this essay, I will discuss why the advantages of this technology surpass its disadvantages.
First of all, the major reason why driverless vehicles would be more useful than automobiles with drivers that comes to mind is that the possibility of car crashes will decrease for sake of some driver's carelessness and unconsciousness. As we can see always statics on break news that a lot of crashes are just because of this issue. for instance, people who are drunk at night or who drive with insomnia and are in a sleepless mood will be in safety and would not put others in danger of car accidents.
Secondly, this can lead to needless taking and educating driving lessons for both the government and society, and due to this, everybody can transport more easily, even at younger ages, although the authority would not spend a lot of money and currency on educating the folk, so the government' incomes can have better usage, but it should be taken into account that this not be beneficial for private sections which teach inhabitants of the city how to drive.
However this mechanization can raise some issues, for example, the number of teenagers commuting everywhere without a supervisor and their parent's observation and it can cause other issues, for example, an increase in the number of lost children in police stations.
All in all, it is been always a debate and a dilemma about whether mechanization and full automation would be beneficial or not. in my point of view, it can lead to better usage of the government’s finances, although can lead to a better situation for uncautious drivers and lowing diving accidents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...lessness and unconsciousness. As we can see always statics on break news that a lot of cra...
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...crashes are just because of this issue. for instance, people who are drunk at night...
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...is, everybody can transport more easily, even at younger ages, although the autho...
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...inhabitants of the city how to drive. However this mechanization can raise some issue...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92617449664 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80732727653 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563758389262 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.028821651 49.4020404114 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.111111111 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1111111111 20.7667163134 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185819183859 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897596610421 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895407799849 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109937377167 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979929217745 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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