Many people are now opting to provide technology companies with their personal data in exchange for access to software. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Recently, it is common for people to agree to give their personal information to many tech companies in order to use their service. Despite the convenience to access free many apps, the risk of leaking personal data and its consequences far outweigh any advantages.
Using many apps free of charge is the favor of most people, especially the youth, who are always curious about new things. In order to get approval from technology firms, many people do not hesitate to provide the right to access their personal data and they are happy to try many apps as possible to make their lives more comfortable. For example, Google Map is a famous app for direction, which help millions of commuters traveling around the world without the GPS, but it also requests to access user’s location and phone before using the app. Therefore, I believe that users should not neglect the hidden risk of revealing this data to them due to the risk of breaking personal privacy.
Although people can be beneficial from accessing free software, it also brings some serious dangers to them. The evident risk is the leaking of an individual’s data to third parties, which can lead to massive effects on people’s lives. What would happen if they use this data for illegal activities such as scams? For instance, cyber-criminals can hack personal information from techs companies and use them to hack bank accounts of users or take advantage of their SIN number, credit score to loan money illegally. Many people have lost completely their credit score and faced extreme difficulties to rent a house or get the approval for their mortgage. Their lives could be changed completely because of this incident.
In conclusion, the negative effects of leaking personal information to many technology firms far outweigh the benefits that their software can bring to users. It is recommended that everyone should review the term and conditions of any software twice before they agree with them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09785932722 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70158520088 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553516819572 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.387727504 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.071428571 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368240632233 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118901172729 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720846290587 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22269070273 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549732017433 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.