An increasing number of people decide to spend more and more time at work. This phenomenon can be explained by 2 main reasons, one is job promotions, one is a rise in salary levels. Extra hours of working instigate plenty of concerning fitness problems as well as reduce the private time for oneself and families.
There are 2 feasible push factors that encourage workers to dedicate more and more time and effort at work. Firstly, spending more hours working means employees can detect their mistakes and therefore enhance their skills, which ultimately lead to a job promotion. The more skillful the workers are, the more tasks they can handle, and when they receive lots of credibility because of their hard work and brilliant skills, they will get a higher position in their work. Secondly, not only devote time for promotions, but employees also desire higher salary levels to boost their living standards. This is because most enterprises offer an extra wage for personnel who work longer hours. For example, the HBI, a garment corporation, pays a bonus of 10 dollars for people who work 3 hours more than usual.
Despite a list of wonderful advantages of working more hours, people who get involved might have to face some serious issues. Firstly, the more hours people spend working, the less leisure time they have for themselves and family. As a result, relationships within a family can be disturbed because of a lack of gathering time. Secondly, in terms of well-being, the insufficiency of time for unwinding will result in fatigue and devastation, more seriously, anxiety and depression. If an employee cannot have time for relaxing, plus pressure from works, they will definitely suffer from stress, which gradually becomes depression, a dangerous mental disease. In addition, for those like garment and manufacturing workers, sitting for such a long time will cause obesity and spinal degeneration.
In conclusion, there are 2 explanations why people tend to work more extra hours, which are promotion purposes and salary boosts. However, it means that there is a reduction in personal and family spare time along with a rise in several health issues.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11516853933 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69030596421 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556179775281 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3142350199 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.117647059 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9411764706 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19914990805 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692438855599 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512643907477 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13541267913 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446987034287 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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