Many people are working longer hours. Why is this happening? What problems can this cause to people?
In this day and age, there have been a surge in the amount of people who are accepting working overtime instead of following the typical nine-to-five workday. It is considered as an upheaval trend. the primary reasons behind are that there are loads of workloads and people need to ensure a stable income. Although working longer hours likely continue, it has adverse impacts on human being’s health and quality of life.
The undeniable fact is nowadays the needs to work additional hours often stems from increasing demand in the workplace. To keep up with the competition in an increasingly globalized marketplace, employees are expected to assume a high volume of work, often with inadequate staff and support. This has resulted in employees having to work extra hours to compensate. Moreover, the old mindset about that parents must make every effort as much as possible to do work and accumulate for the next generation still exists to date. Therefore, it is evident that their perspectives are always chasing an ambitious dream that can able to hold a huge volume of property that not only make sure them have high quality of life, but also bring a brighter prospect for their descendants in the future. If everyone does not devote their extra valuable time to work, it is likely that they may face loads of difficulties in terms of finance. Because of the fact that the world is experiencing fast-paced growth leading to the surge in the cost of living.
Extra office hours can adversely affect workers’ health, as well as their private lives. First of all, working overtime can lead to a lack of sufficient rest, decrease in energy and may concentrate well to solve problems because they cannot allocate their time to relieve all out of stress and refresh themselves for a long time working under pressure. It is often said by scientists that those who have to sit in their office in long-lasting spans, they may likely increase the risk of strokes and prone spinal injuries, etc. In addition, as more time is spent at work, workers probably less time for their beloved ones, more precisely it is possible to create an intangible barrier with everyone surrounded them and weaken bonds between family members and friends. As a result, this can generate a pang of general dissatisfaction, in the long run it potentially become a catalyst for stress.
In conclusion, extended working hours due to serving the demands of workplace and desiring high source of finance. It can make an important contribution to prevent employees from a healthy and balance life. Hence, the local governments should take a consider to impose a strict and appropriate law about weekly time-work standards.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2249.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 451.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9866962306 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71050856885 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558758314856 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 708.3 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1601891295 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.368421053 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7368421053 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21052631579 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19949081848 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615280749049 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548332311427 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127389979998 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522699566763 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.