In some countries, university students live at home，while in other countries, university students go to other cities rather than live with their family. Do you think the benefits of living away from home outweigh the disadvantages?
In modern times, it is trues that some undergraduates and their parents make a decision to still live under the roof, at the same time it is expected of others to flew out their nest when leaving high schools. in my perspective, merits of the phenomenon would shadow its drawbacks.
On the one hand, staying at a considerable distance from their home place may have a global chance allowing students to gradually approach to multifaced adulthood life. Firstly, many parent tend to employ strictly rules to force their offspring on implementing whatever they order. As the results, new generations may be raised up a person who cannot likely know how to make a precise decision which prevent them from obtaining more success and even reaching the top. Therefore, living away far their families, they are given the room to nurture self-reliant, which means they would learn how to come to a decision without parents’ excessively interfering in urgent situations. Furthermore, live separately from the family offers them valuable opportunities to develop such skills such as problem-solving, time management which greatly contribute to lead them reach success in the later future and can help them to grow faster. Hindrances and failure that they encounter when starting to be come a adult will be valuable lessons, helping them form strong spirit and enrich their experience.
Despite the aforementioned advantages, there are also inevitable disadvantages that staying independently may arise. To begin with, sharing accommodation with their parents is deemed as economical expenses. To be specific, it is unlikely for most undergraduates to have a permanent jobs or stable income which help them afford living costs, they just have part-time jobs to likely enrich living experience so they have to need of their parents’ financial support. This put an great financial burden on their parent, especially those who live in poverty and make relatively them exhaust. On top of that, some higher education students tend to find a part-time jobs in order to support partly their parents in term of finance. If they do not have effective time-management to balance between learning and working, making them fall behind with their studies. This have adversely impacts on their study income and productivity in undertaking jobs.
in conclusion, although there are several demerits should be not overlooked that living with families could pose, live at a long distance from their hometown will teach them how to come to a decision and more independent in their own life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2156.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23300970874 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90430041185 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584951456311 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 670.5 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.4427805101 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.75 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203570126455 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660534027681 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497833353724 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139915371307 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244241464311 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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